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(Setting: Outside in the middle of the city)
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Jeremie grabs the electricty-infused Kris hand with his own, Xana-infected hand, a major electrical shock echoing throughout his body, nearly splitting his heart in half and blood shooting out of his mouth. "K...K...Kr...Kris...has...f-fulfilled part...of...her...purpose..." Jer gasps out, his eyes deadened.
Mental Jeremie skids to a stop, beginning to flicker out of existence. "Congrats, Xana, I think you won. I don't know though. There are such things as miracles."
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"Help Ulrich with Aelita! I'll go see what's happening!" Odd called back before disappearing down the hall. William stood there for a moment before nodding and running back to Ulrich, propping her up on the other side.
"Let's hurry. I have a really bad feeling about this."
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Kris was shocked, purely shocked. It happened so fast; in a blur. One second Jeremie was alive, the next he was dead. Her wings and horns disappeared as Xana fled from her body, trying to escape the electricity. At once tears rushed to Kris's face, even though she had only come back and had no idea was was going on. Suddenly the smell of blood and death hit her as her tears cleared paths through the blood on her face. She knew the blood was not her own, even though it should have been. It was silent until Kris screamed, staring in horror at the dead boy on the ground.
"Jeremie! JEREMIE! Get off me, Kenny!" she shouted, uncurling the boy's tail from around her neck-bleeding a bit from the barb-and dropped to her knees. She picked up Jeremie, shaking him gently at first, then harder in a desperate attempt to wake him, even though she knew it was useless.
"Jeremie! Wake up! Common! You can't die yet! You can't! You still have things to do in life! JEREMIE!" she screamed in a fruitless effort. More tears fell from her cheeks, falling on the poor boy's face. She hugged the boy tight to her, sobbing uncontrollably.
"Oh gosh, Jeremie. I'm so sorry..." she muttered into his chest, "It should have been me... Oh gosh... I'm so sorry..."
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(Shud-der)

Aelita snaps awake, eyes wide. "What's happening?!" she demands, trying to walk on her own but collapsing. "William, you take her." Ulrich leaves William to Aelita and Triplicates, one clone staying with Aelita and William, the other two following Odd. "Something's happening and we need to know what is going on!"
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Sorry about the edit little Aelita. After reading your story I had to give it a rating and a warning label; not because it was a bad story, but, because of younger members on the site. Just to give anyone a heads up on the content .

Interesting story...All though I was a little confused with what was happening. Poor Jeremy    Aelita would be heart broken.
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<--Sig by Soul of Legends
I am Xana! Jeremy's worst night mare!

Well I give it a rating; good but need something else... Cts!
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Oh, sorreh...
I'll continue this one. KRIS IS NOT MY CHARACTER. She's my friend's friend Tori's character.

I'm just a spectator, posting with permission. Jeremie-san gave me it and told me to do whatever with it.
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"Kid, you're in the wrong section." St. Peter is pointing to Jeremie. "Eh? Me?" Jeremie questions, standing in the line to Heaven.
"Nah. You don't belong in heck, either, so..." St. Peter plants a holy foot in the boy's face. "Alright, kiddo! See you soon! Maybe! Happy haunting!"
'Haunting?' Jeremie ponders, falling back towards Earth. "WHAT IS HAPPENING TO MY BODY?!!! I FEEL LIKE AN ONION!!!"
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The only skin left rips as bone shreds through it, the boy's skeleton shifting into a sort of uber form, peeling the gossamer renmants of Jer away from itself and assuming a sort of dragon-like image. Its eyes open, revealing an empty black hollow.

Odd ignored anything around him. There was only one thing set on his mind. Find Kris. Although he does stop at the sight of...whatever that was and gags.
"The heck!?"" he mutters, staring.

Satsuki appears once more. "Contamination by a Dark Figure, I believe. It might have been Xana, but we don't know what happened to him at the asylum...but I have a theory. There is a certain phrase that can be said to individuals like this. Would you kindly..."

'Jeremie' turns in Satsuki's direction and snarls, but does nothing more-the eyes now shining white.
"Would you kindly assume a more human form?"
As if in a trance, the bones shift against each other and reform flesh, clothing and hair, making an exact replica of Jeremie as he once was before killed, eyes still white but fading to black once more.

"I thought so."
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William watched as the two Ulrichs ran off, leaving him, a clone, and Aelita.
"... Of course." he said, sighing.
"Common." William begins, lifting the girl onto his back like a piggyback ride and dashing down the hallway after Odd and the other clones.
"Why I'm always left with the disabled ones, I'll never know."

Aelita moans, her face flushed with fever and anger. "Disabled? I'll show you disabled, buddy boy." She kicks his sides. "RIDE 'EM, COWBOY!!" the girl screams, as sleepy students at last peer out of their dorms.
"Can't you Super-Smoke it there?" the pink-haired girl asks. "And why are you blushing? Are you ill?"
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Ulrich skids to a stop, feeling his sanity slip one notch lower on the global scale as he takes in the sight of the monster's eyes and then-
"Psst! Guys! What just happened?" A black-haired nine-year-old stumbles out of the bushes, his eyes shining a clear blue-Jeremie's favorite and symbolic color. "What...what...what IS THAT?! Th-my...I'm over-but..."

'Jeremie' makes an effort to speak, mouthing the words in a strange language...one slightly familiar. "What's he speaking, Satsuki?" Lanne asks, feeling weak in the knees. The alien shrugs. "I've no idea. It doesn't sound like anything I have ever heard."
"Me niether."
Kris stops, surprisingly still able to hear whatever 'Jeremie' was saying. For some reason the language sounded familiar, yet at the same time it didn't. She struggled to make out the words yet couldn't.
"C-could you repeat that?" she asks, turning halfway so she could semi-look behind her yet not at the thing that had taken Jeremie's body.
Odd smiles and he swore his heart skipped a beat as he heard Kris's voice, but didn't dare take a step towards 'Jeremie' to go to her. "Darn..." he whispers.
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"Ow! I meant that you couldn't use your legs!" William growls, "And I-since I've never done it with someone other than me, I'd rather not risk a Super-Smoke. Besides, we're...huh?" William skids to a stop so he wouldn't crash into one of the Ulrich clones.
"What's going on?" he asks quietly.

"Aelita...uh...I don't know how to tell you this, but..." Too late. "AAAUUUUUHHHH, JEREMIE!!!!" The pink-haired girl's wings pop out of her back as she darts for the boy and clobbers him. The real Jeremie sweatdrops.

Aelita glances at Xana's human form, and then at her hands. An evil smile forms on her face before she lets loose with a millionsomething Energy Fields. "DIE!! DIE!! DIEEEEE!!!!!" the girl screams. "Angry mob time?" Lanne suggests, before getting pounced on by Jeremie and engaging in fisticuffs with him for a little bit.

Xana yelps, getting up and running before disappearing into a spectator's DS as he stepped on it to hide from the attacks, but ending up being a farmer in Harvest Moon.
"The heck!?" Xana bellows, looking down to his new game attire.

"Gimme!" Aelita swipes the DS and saves it before turning it off-and turning Xana off before gasping and looking at Kris and the probably-furious Odd.
Kris falls over, out cold and now dead as Odd screams at Aelita to turn the game back on.
Jeremie shakes his head. "Isn't this supposed to be sad...?"

"SAD MOMENT OVER!" snaps a voice from the sky.
"Who th-?!"
"Don't mind me! I'm just your writer!"
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Good story so far.


As for the Heavenly humor? Eh...
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<--Sig by Soul of Legends
I am Xana! Jeremy's worst night mare!

Dude, no need to be sorry. I am just stating my opinion. It doesn't neccisarily mean that it is true.
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Lulz...
Kris (Xana's creation) was taken over by Xana for a moment and attempted to electrocute Jeremie, Jeremie reached out for her hand with his Xana-Infected one (which leads to his heart) and that's how it happened.
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